by Brittany Jul 29, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I have been waiting |
by ---AL---
Great poem, the flow was perfect at the start, it seemed to lose some of its perfection a little way through it but the rhyming was good, and the story told was interesting to read, especially since i had a crush on someone three years older and got shot down too. But yeah good poem! |