by Ren Jul 29, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I was holding on tight, |
by yogi73
i like how you built up the anticipation and anxiety of falling, falling into the unknown world, and cutting deeper into the night. Great imagery and creating a feel of slight desperation, until you nicely finish with back to swaying in the wind.. |
by Ren
Thank you so much! I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment :) |
by Ben Pickard
Well written, Ren, with some great imagery throughout. |
by Ren
Thank you so much, Ben! :) |