Awww that was such a cute poem! 5

I wrote a poem similiar to this one but I like yours better. Its short and to the point. Keep writing!

J

your poem was straight to the point. i feel i can connect with that poem. i can relate to all the feelings. the poems full of emotion. check out some of mine if you have the time. i love your poems. xxx

aww cute poem...short and to the point..great job...5/5 luv yas mwah

-kayla-

OMG I LOVE THIS POEM ITS SO DEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP!!! GREATE JOB

I'm stunned.. I actully got chills all along my spine when I read the last 3 lines, I don't think that has ever happend before when I've read a poem. Absolutly excellent, you got me hooked and I have to read more;p

Best wishes,
Patrik

Wow I loved that one. And good for you! What goes around comes around!! I'm proud of you. Great job and keep up the good work!!

[[5]] duh!

~*Christina*~

I really loved this! Just one slight suggestion:
I needed someone to keep me sane
to help remove all my pain

maybe you could say 'to help remove all of my pain' Just makes it flow a little better. Still an incredible poem though!

Wow nice poem i know this all to well been here many times, but keep your head up when your not looking for it some one will be there. nice poem 5.5

This poem is so true . By the time someone realizes how much they need you it is sometimes to late.Great work

Very nice poem, 5/5 :) Keep up the talented work -staci

Needless to say, this was a great poem. I liked the repetition of the phrase "But you weren't there" which made it look as though you were complaining to him all the way through, and in the end, you stop being weak and simply disappear to forget him. Nicely done, well developed, and great rhyming couplets. Well done indeed.

Excellent work...so simple yet to the point... you were so strong to let go ... im not : ( !! thanks for your comment ! God bless!!

Interesting, very blunt =) i like it, nice work

Wow.. that was so gud.. i lykd how u ended ur piece.. gr8 ending.. and it expresses the emotion ryt.. once agen, gr8 flow and perfect rhyme
thumbs up
Nannoush

^_^ I've read a few of your poems now... and you keep inspiring me... I honestly think you're an amazing writer and I can't wait to finish this comment so I can read more.

-Carissa-