Comments : This world is cruel.

  • 19 years ago

    by Theresa

    That's really great!

    <3 Moe

  • 19 years ago

    by Some Random Human

    Very good poem, and true indeed.

  • 19 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    amazing!!! keep it up!
    -xXx-

  • 19 years ago

    by Knoxy

    Hey, this is amazing...and it really does make a lot of sense...really made me think, this is really deep, great job! keep on writing and take care
    ~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

  • 19 years ago

    by lauren.

    this is an amazing poem. 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by M MEM

    wow. this is very good, but its sad. 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by kat

    i love it..it is so deepl in thought ..keep up your awesome work..love it!!

  • 19 years ago

    by unstated affinity

    Wow.. amazing, i like it a lot..thanks for commenting my poems last time..i really like this alot because i can really feel it..

  • 19 years ago

    by Forsaken Redeemer

    Yet another amazing poem, i'm waiting for your work to come out in hardback very soon ;)

    xXx

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Nice Nice Nice...you have that rap ability...Excellent Excellent Excellent..Truly Amazing
    5/5
    PeAcE
    ~The Poet~

  • 5 years ago

    by Ishan Tripathi

    ????????????????????

  • 4 years ago

    by Ananya

    So Beautifully written that it hurts