Hey. well dark poems are ususally not my cup of tea but i don't know, for some reason, i thought i'd read yours. well anyways... i really liked it. it's really good. a nice flow, a good choice of words... the whole works. great job. 5/5 :)

p.s. lately, i've had dreams that i've actually died. it's weird. like, the exact mment i 'die' i wake up.... and yeah, kind of creepy.