by ♥ briTiany ♥ Jul 29, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
It was a beautiful day |
by Marie
Awwww i am really sorry about that! This poem is really good tho and I like the way it is written! It is bittersweet and that combination can always be very touching! Keep up the great work and thanks for commenting on my poem! To answer your question about my poem: I went through something a little bit similar a while ago, and now I'm in an awesome situation so I just decided to combine these ideas. I was really experimenting first and didn't think it would turn out great, but it turned out pretty good, so yes and no. I didn't directly experience that tho. |
by Ann Stareyes
Britiany... That was beautiful. And truly doesn't it help release some of the pain and heartache that you feel. Great job, sweetie... Beautifully written. Hugs,love, Ann |