That was actually really good. I'm so sorry for your loss though....the flow was smooth, the rhymes seemed natural, and the emotion is projected through your words. But maybe instead of spelling it "berried" the proper spelling you should use is "buried".

Stay strong...

Peaces. //Ari\\

gr8 poem but im sooo sorry 4 ur loss. stay strong! i know what it feels lk. xxxxx

absolutely beautiful sad written, i'm sorry for your loss, perhaps it's piece of unexpected good furtune. stay strong.

did you ever heard this life is like grassland..?

bert.~

good

wow great wrk i loved it. im sry for wht happed:( *hugs*