Don't Give Up Yet

by Cait   Jul 29, 2005


You said you were happy
but now your sad
you didn't want to hurt us
or even make us mad

you didn't want to lie
so you told me the truth
you let your feelings go
and turned your mind loose

i understand what you feel
because I've felt that way
so don't give up on us
because I'm here every day

you can cry on my shoulder
and use my ears
because i will wipe away
your troubled tears

every day we wake up
hoping to die
and every day we wake up
having to lie

but we have each other
so we don't have too
bring them down with us
with what we do

we need to change
or give up on life
we gotta stop
this terrible strife

because if we don't
we might just die
then every joy
will be a lie

so hold my hand
and we'll get through
don't give up
its just me and you

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  • 19 years ago

    by The Flame Within

    wow caity this is just so good. i love it. and yes you are a good writer, weither you like it or not. your are an awsome friend caity, and whoever this is too is blessed to know you. keep up this awsome work ok. much Love God bless

    Nick