Poisoned life i think would be a good title for it. good poem i like it! glad to see more posted from you! i'll catch up with the others when i have more time!

~PLP~ lil slam~

I think the first line of each stanza sums up the meaning behind the poem. What great writing; thus i haven't seen a poem that could say so much in the two lines. I can't help you with the title though, when it comes to that sort of thing i'm hopeless. However Jacklyns suggestion of "Poisoned Life" is quite cool. It kind of contradicts it self in a way.

Luvoo Muchly <333.

- Kals.

this is a very nice poem and I hope things are well with you! =) its nice to see another good poem from you

good jobz

-Josiah

hey i just wanted to thank u for helping me with the guy problem i worked it out and everythings great again between me and my boyfriend, but u really help. i liked this poem. it was wonderful. i have a title but i dont know if ull like it or not Swimming Blood hope u like it. thanks again