well done good poem!! *5/5* goodwork
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That was very cleverly written. I really loved this:

I know what she really wants,
a great release.
From her stress, her life,
her everything.

it caught my eye and it just flowed so nicely. I've seen a lot of poems written about something similar and I have one similar but this just takes the cake. I don't know, it just seemed to flow and to me that is SOOOOOOOOOO important. Well done!!!!

-Lyd

Wow, i see wt u meant meant when u said mine surpasses yours. i agree and i think this poem is great. its such a sad thing to no that you are alone in the world so much that you consider suicide. well hang in there and take care and im glad your better now. 5/5