Never Free

by LostHopesCrimsonTears   Jul 30, 2005


Silent cries
Invisible tears
But the blood so red
Just bleeding out her fears

She's prayed for so long
Now her dreams have come true
But then why is it so
That she's feeling so blue

The crimson streams
Flow down her arm
The beauty resulting
From her own self harm

She thinks back to times
When life was so simple and true
Tears of salt
And skys of blue

Now her tears are red
From the blood she had shed
And the skys remain grey
Each day after day

Her love from above
Has now been returned
So why does she feel
As if shes still being burned

In the pits of hell
She continues stay
She cant figure out why
She still feels this way

She wants to be happy
For her heart to be mend
She wants for the pain
That shes feeling to end

But tis her destiny
For her its just too late
Her soul never free
This is her only fate

Copyright ©2005 Amanda Hope Indelicato

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  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    WOW great job really sad but i loved it keep it up 5/5

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    The crimson streams
    Flow down her arm
    The beauty resulting
    From her own self harm

    I thought that was a really powerful stanza. Overall, the poem was incredibly powerful. I liked the vers form, and the rhyming was near perfect. Another awesome write.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Great peice. the flow is vey smooth thoughout and the content powerfully portrayed with plenty of strong expressions and well composed ideas.

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Allison

    I loved this one too. You have a great talent. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by I Where the Wings of A Fallen Angel..

    Wow.. that was a GREAT poem. 5/5!

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