This poem is really good, I like it.

wow i like this alot. ! awesome! i really like this part: she's prayed for so long
now her dreams have come true
but then why is it so
that she's feeling so blue
because its true..for me...after my dreams came true i just sank into depression..your a very talented writer. keep it up ! hugs-hayley

this is an awesome poem good job its really great im loving it i can really relate to it and i like it bunches good job.

...i liked this poem alot...5/5 keep up the good work and stay strong

I can never seem to ryme :)
Great job

Nicely done. You may want to review the poem again on some minor issues, for example... "She continues stay" should it be "She continues to stay"? and "For her its just to late" should be "For her its just too late". Overall, good work!

Ooo, thanx.. yea, forgot that extra o lol.. but it ist supposed to be "stay"

" in the pits of hell, she continues to stay"

hope that clarifies that lol

Wow.. that was a GREAT poem. 5/5!

I loved this one too. You have a great talent. 5/5

Great peice. the flow is vey smooth thoughout and the content powerfully portrayed with plenty of strong expressions and well composed ideas.

5/5

The crimson streams
Flow down her arm
The beauty resulting
From her own self harm

I thought that was a really powerful stanza. Overall, the poem was incredibly powerful. I liked the vers form, and the rhyming was near perfect. Another awesome write.

Peace. [Sole]

WOW great job really sad but i loved it keep it up 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*