Hey, Crystal. I love you & miss you. He isn't worth it. Don't be sad because of him. Oh yeah, and I really did like this poem, but I'm not going to rate it cuz I have to get off this instint. I love you. Bye.

hey. this is really good! it's very touching. I would say keep it up. Keep it from the heart. Don't force the words. Let them come to you.
It's really very pretty.

wow, excellent poem. i really liked how you put emotion into it and didnt force any rhymes...oh and i dont care which 6 poems you read of mine

I liked it alot, not much more I can say really:p

Best wishes,
Patrik

true true...5/5
much love

The first stanza flows very well, it's alittle off in the other stanza's but still a well written poem. I like the way you compare the relationship to nature.. good job.

great write hun I liked your choice of words

I like your poems alot there very good keep it up 5/5 and thanks for your comments