wow...amazing!!!! keep it up.
-xXx-

another brilliant poem, short bt well wriiten and powerful. 5/5 xxx stay strong and keep writin

omg that's was so amazing, it was short but meaningful and sad, truley one of a kind. very talented you are. always keep writting.
5/5 <333
-xKitx-

awesome poem one of my fav of all time. 5

Thanks for the comment
This poem is really good

Great job! Very descriptive and has a good point!! keep writing!! 5/5

this poem is awesome! but plez dun commit suicide!! i kno u dun kno me but ive lost sum1 close 2 suicide and u think no1 cares but they do. and if u leave then there will be a huge hole left that no1 can fill! stay strong!! 5/5

Great.Keep the poems comin'

love the poem.....

A wondeful poem!!! Sad but I've felt that way before so it means alot to me. Keep it up!!! :-)
Stephanie

is a real sad poem written so welll... !

wow, i loved this poem, not what its about or anything just that its deep, and meaningful, the rhyming and everythings great, and it showed emotion.

wow..im glad that you are still here...if this was a bout you

5/5
keep your head up

angel

WOW hun this was great i luved it so much..keep up the awesum work..
luv ya,
LoVeAbLeShOrTie

wow, very sad poem. i read alot of these a day and thier just sooo sad. very depressing. but it was very good. i mean yea the rhyming and everything was good.

wow very beautiful you should read some of mine i think you would like them5/5

Not sure what to say, I'm stunned, it was absolutly excellent.

Best wishes,
Patrik

Another good poem, well written and thought out. Good flow and very emotional. Great job. ^_^x

Oh that was excellent, I thought the last line was shaky but it still ended so beautifully, very sad and well put

If this is you, Sabrina, then I hope you don't follow through. Don't give up just yet. (sorry to assume it's all true to you, but it seems so)

I wish there had been some sort of warning about the blood...but I got through it alright...(it's hard for me to take sometimes)...you did create a picture which is good normally...I just don't like imagining anything dealing with blood... anyway, well done. I like the first stanza the most ;)

xxx