you know what i love about ur poem? is that ur not afraid to say what u really feel and how u really feel. not alot of ppl can handle true and raw feelings but i love that u didnt sugar coat it with alot of lies. u just tols everything how it was. i loved it keep it up.

Your poem ... WOW ... I have never read anything like it's so strong yet so fragile... I loved your style keep it up