That was such a creative and unique idea for a poem. Great imagery and very well written. It makes one think of how difficult life can be for some individuals. Take Care! Brooke~

This poem was different from those you normally read on a site like this. but it was really good. it's the type i like to read. i'll be watching for more!
crystal

Wow. For a short poem, that is pretty darn amazing. I like the fast pace it seems to have, felt like I really was inside your mind.

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