Please let me know your honest opinions. I have tried very hard on this poem and it has taken me three days past the posting date of the last one to write this, i have had writers block for so long. Please if you vote against it, leave me a comment as to why.

Vote against it? no reason for that...tis another great one...

"Note left. saying what she left unsaid
no more she can speak, for she is dead."

I think maybe it would sound better as, "no more can she speak..."

Honestly, your work is amazing. I don't even know what to say beyond that...

xxx

I loved it. It was amazing. A little problem with the ending but I'm not sure what it was. Still I did like it. Excellent work.
~Faith of the Fallen

DIttO
~HazE

aww that was great...keep it up, loved it...

-brittnay- ((5/5))

Oh God! so deep, especially the 4th and the last part, those were my best favourite parts.

Dark Savior Excellent simple write. By the way, i gotta ask you, why this subject? what was on your mind? or is it a true story?

Take carez
Rua Francis.

Wow i like this poem alot...~5~

Wow! This was amazingly written. I don't think I have a favorite part cause it was all so good. This definitley got you a spot on my favorites list. 5/5

marcella

This was truly awesome, I love it. You get a 5/5 from me, but i have to ask, why would we vote against it, it was beautiful keep it up

qawsee

I liked it. It was sad. i gave it a 5/5. I dont know what else to say.

Wow!

Just wow

nothin else to say
it was fantastic
its very good

I think this one had the best diction.You use such simple words, but each has its own powerful meaning. This wasn't my favorite from you, but I still enjoyed reading it. Nik