by Ben Jul 31, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Without your love |
by Synyster
Beautiful poem. You are a very talented writer and it shows in the control you have over your phrasing and rhyme schemes. This piece conveys your emotions well and it's easy to read, because it pulls you in and makes you want to keep reading. Each line draws you to the next and that's a good quality to have in a poem. Beautiful work. |
Benjamin, I love you SO much. No matter what, forever. You ARE the sweetest thing in the WORLD. I'm so lucky, and I love you so much. <33 You're so great hun, thank you oh so much...I miss you. <ben3333. This is so beautiful, thank you. xoxoxoxoxox |
That has really nice form...and it's heartfelt...another lovely poem. |