by AnotherJournalEntry Jul 31, 2005
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
You can't always hide |
by Kurt
eh, not bad =-). The key is you tried. Try to get more of the lines to rhyme. Put a larger vocab to use as well. I liked it, because sometimes you need someone.. Anyway, keep working and keep practicing and you'll get better. (if i listen to music it can help) |