Wow that was soo good I love it....
Sarah~

Well I like it, but the verb tenses aren't right...

"When you fell i would catch you
when you called i will answer you
when you cried i will wipe your tears
when you were scared i would make you have no fear
But Now if you need me i won't be here"

It should be:

When you fall i will catch you
when you call i will answer you
when you cry i will wipe your tears
when you are scared i will make you have no fear
But Now if you need me i won't be here

*Or (I think this one is the best way, all in past tense...) :

When you fell i would catch you
when you called i would answer you
when you cried i would wipe your tears
when you were scared i would make you have no fear
But Now if you need me i won't be here

Once you change it, it will make more sense...

xxx

i like it the way it is. great poem, i say the same thing now lol
xoxo xoxo samara

Nice Job..your poem was really good..you are so lucky you can get things to rhyme..geez..it was great..i like it the way it it to..hahah

claire nicholle..*

this poem is really good.. but it's kinda sad because you woudl do all of this stuff for a girl and then when they need you the most you wont be there. humm thats life Ü

~April~