Good poem..If this is about a friend, Im glad things got better! 5/5!

<3 Katie

nice job keep it up 5/5

Very nicely written. 5/5 none to less. Keep writing and take care (always) xx:

*> : PainOfOne

bri||iant ab x

this is a very good poem and thanks for the comment and rate

You're poem started off good, then becomes unclear what your story is.

♥ Always,
Carrie

Hey ab
Thanks I just got your comment
Your in my favourites too:)
love you lots
love soph

Hey geourages lil missy, you are a good and meaningful poet. check out my poems called things change, good friends and friendship river. (i think you'll like them) cya luv Fibi

Hey geourages lil missy, you are a good and meaningful poet. check out my poems called things change, good friends and friendship river. (i think you'll like them) cya luv Fibi