by masked_senses Jul 31, 2005
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
People pray, devote and believe |
great job. keep it up. thanks for commenting on my poem |
by Synyster
Very strong, intense poem. It's sad you have othing to believe in. No man is an island. But aside from that, your poem, in it's structure, phrasing and rhyme schemes is excellent and I would't change a thing. |