Aw, thats so sad, good poem though you wrote it well.
please pleaaaseee check out some of my poems and vote and comment.
keep your head up.

aww, very nice poem! Sorry about your dad..I hope your ok!

<3 Kat

im sooo sry bout ur dad hunni...im here if you need to talk always eh...hope ur family gets better remember ur dad is in a better place now

stay with us always
larochelle

gr8 job! take care of urself and be strong! ur a great writer! keep it up! 5/5