I feel so tired now...sad but great poem....stay strong and try to get get some sleep
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as i read this i felt peaceful inside. this is very well done! it is sad though, but worded and arranged with beauty! hope things are ok!

~PLP~ lil slam~

This poem is worded beautifully and the ending was great it tells of many miseries.

take care

wow, wonderful poem, beautiful reli, ur a great writer and ur poems get better and better lv rachel xxx