Wow.. this is really great... it shows so much emotion and detail.. nicely done

I vote on your's you vote on mine.

Nice poem

hey girl that was awesome!!! bet you didn't expect to see a comment from me. anyways i'm just letting you know i love your poems and your an extremely great writer. keep them coming.
~your sis-ApRiL

That was very tragic,but i understand that a little. it's happened to a lot of people... im an angel in my own way,but i get annoyed if any one im "in luv with" calls me an angel/hun/watever mushy crap he can pull. it was a great poem,i hope a lot of people can comment :)
in my opinion i like comments better than votes.
(dont worry,ill rate!)
have a nice day...

~Rayne,Tyr,Star