Comments : The day that she met you...

  • 18 years ago

    by firexflys

    Nice job new way to use the "rose are red and violest are blue" keep upo teh good work

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    That Poem was Great...Really Great...And dont worry about the poem thing..i understand you made a mistake were human were not perfect but thank you for commentin them..i appreciated it...5/5
    Great Job
    Ttyl sometime PeAcE
    ~The Poet~

  • 18 years ago

    by AnAstAciA

    That was wonderful...
    "Her roses were dead
    Her violets were too,
    Her sugar wasn't sweet
    Until the day she met you
    Now her roses are red
    Her violets are blue,
    Her sugar is sweet
    Now that she knows you
    The day that you met"

    With this lyrics i can totally relate...good job:) 5/5
    *pls check mine and tell me what you think:)