by Manda Jul 31, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
People crowd around, |
by Lenny
Nice poem, when you rhyme try to keep it the same amount of syllables in the lines i know its difficult and takes twice the amount of time but it just makes the poem flow fantastically, your really talented Keep it up! |
by Unity
w0w this poem is excelleent, i give it a 5 it sent shivers up my spine, very heart breaking ..but really amazing. |