by Fighter (Ariane L.) Jul 31, 2005
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
The sun sets in the distance. |
by JJ
calm..peaceful..beautiful. it comes to life when you read it, almost like being there. good work! |
Dats really good and true. It givs u n image ob summer's end in ur mind. VERY GOOD! :D |
by skyfox
great stuff. it is my favourite time of day and you did it justice |
This is truly beautiful, the first stanza immediately sets everything up for the rest of the poem. Kudos! |
by kiesha
That was really beautiful. You did a great job of capturing that in words. Keep up the good work and take care. |