Planned Suicide

by healing wounds   Jul 31, 2005


I walk into the bathroom
close the door tightly behind me

Sitting on the sink is what will end my life...
A bottle of pills to end the strife.
With vodka in hand
tears pouring down my face
suddenly dumps the pills in my mouth...
to only chase it down with vodka
What a sweet taste.

Lying on the floor...
with a picture of US in hand...
calmly saying goodbye.

I pray that one day...
We'll be together again
Drifting away to a far away place.

Its now that time that people know
That this was a planned suicide.

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a few months back that was my plan..not anymore its now just a poem.... PLEASE RATE AND COMMENT...it would mean a lot.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Gale

    Wow...really good

  • 19 years ago

    by Torn

    i'm so sorry you felt/feel like this. i hope you're ok. thankyou so much for commenting on my poems, it means so much to me, you have no idea!!!
    take care x x x

  • 19 years ago

    by beautyisnomore

    I know how you feel. I thought of suicide too. Thank god it didn't happen because this poem is beautiful! Great job. Please read mine and comment. Thanks!

  • 19 years ago

    by M MEM

    wow, i really like this, thx for the comment, 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Raven Roth

    Don't think like that. Person's would miss you.I vote on your's you vote on mine.