thanx! yeah i didnt kno how to end it....so i stopped lol.......im up 4 suggestions! ne idears?

great work!!! u're very talented!
i wouldn't know which suggestion to give
yeah, the ending it's a little abrupt but it gives it a special touch too

i think it's really good as it is
if u wanna u can check some of my stuff and tell me what u think ^^

take care!

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keep up y0ur talent h0ney.,,. great j0b.,
*hugs* PunkChick

thanx so much!! u guys rock!!! :)

Amazing write.. I loved it 5/5 nothing less. Keep writing and take care (always))xx:

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DFK :-D

thank you! *hugs*

Great poem...5/5 nething else would be a SIN keep up the great work
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Thank you!