by nikki
hey great poem its really good keep up the good work. |
by Synyster
I can say nothing negative to this piece. It was wonderful. Your structure and phrasing were flawless and I liked your word choicing... Very emotional and detailed. You are an excellent poet. Keep it up. |
by Angie
Wow, this was beautiful and very emotional......... I love it. Keep on writing, you have great talent. |