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  • 19 years ago

    by nikki

    hey great poem its really good keep up the good work.

  • 19 years ago

    by Synyster

    I can say nothing negative to this piece. It was wonderful. Your structure and phrasing were flawless and I liked your word choicing... Very emotional and detailed. You are an excellent poet. Keep it up.

  • 19 years ago

    by Angie

    Wow, this was beautiful and very emotional......... I love it. Keep on writing, you have great talent.

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela