beautiful poem! 5/5 i wrote that poem "slave" after wactching, life and death in rome lol, i was bored. thnx 4 the comment :)

love mark xxx

Terrific poem, loved how it ended!! So glad you have a man to make you feel that way!! I def. rate this a five! Its so worth it!
Kind Regards
~Chelsey~

This poem is so beautiful! thank you for the comment you left me before. =]

Beautiful poem, rich with love and feeling. Love has a poweful emotion to write about, you've really shown this here!

That was great I am so into it. I love writing love poems and reading them but I hate getting writers block. But any who e-mail me sometime cowgirl32202@yahoo.com so we can talk