Comments : Sugar Coated Smiles

  • 19 years ago

    by William Flores

    You don't see the pain.
    I hide…
    It's easier this way .

    I hide my emotions all the time so i know what that feels like. i like how your choice of words describe your emotions in this poem. the idea of drowning your sorrows in chocale milk is very original. you're a great writer

  • 19 years ago

    by Mandy Lou

    I love chocolate milk! Okay, back to the meaning of the poem...This was great! I loved it! The idea of hiding how you truly feel though, it's horrifying to me!

  • 19 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    This poem is one most can relate to, I enjoyed reading it, it was sad but still great, at the end the flow got better and i liked how it changed =]

    another well written poem =]