Interesting poem! Well written! Check mine too... Cheers!

This is really good, and at the same time really scary...So I liked it alot.
Thank you for the great comments.

This is a pretty good poem, it is nice how you included the struggle with thier conscience. There is so much more i felt you could have done with this though. I think it is a really good poem, keep up the good work.

wow, astounding! i cant say anything else but that. keep writing and stay safe strong and healthy!
thanks again for my comments

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