by M MEM Aug 1, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
She isn't real |
I love the power it holds...it's a great short poem, but if possible, I'd like to see you expand on it... I have ones like this though...and it can be fine to leave it, you said what you wanted to say...keep it up ;) |
by Sarah
nice poem, very good job |
by heather
NiCe PoEm..I ReAlLy ThOuGhT It SaId SoMEtHiNg GooD JoB |
by Kaylee
this is a wicked poem..its short but means so much..5/5 great work keep it up |
by Ana Vidovic
I looove this poem! it is soo good! I love the metaphor about her being just a shell of a once human. Its very short but meaningful, great job, 5/5! |