OmIgOsH...iT wAs ShOrT bUt It RoCkEd HuN!...i GiVe iT a 5/5!
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I looove this poem! it is soo good! I love the metaphor about her being just a shell of a once human. Its very short but meaningful, great job, 5/5!

Ana*

this is a wicked poem..its short but means so much..5/5 great work keep it up

Kaylee

NiCe PoEm..I ReAlLy ThOuGhT It SaId SoMEtHiNg GooD JoB

nice poem, very good job

I love the power it holds...it's a great short poem, but if possible, I'd like to see you expand on it... I have ones like this though...and it can be fine to leave it, you said what you wanted to say...keep it up ;)

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