by Allen Aug 1, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
On the cold floor lays a knife |
by Roulin
Really expressing the part of attempting suicide where theres a moment hesitiation and thinking about the world around you. really good keep it up. |
awsome poem! keep up the work |
by Lovemylove
I like it alot, its very good. |
this was a good poem. the way the story changed from sorrow and sadness to happiness was a good trait as well. |
wow i really liked that |