wow that was really great too i love your poems ima add you to my fav.

Dark, but very emotional and touching. You obviously have a lot of talent, keep it up. Great work, 5/5. God Bless,
Car

that was great like most of ur poems..and thank u for commenting on mine..i dunno how u rite the way u do but its great and i luv ur poems

keep writin and always rite from the soul,
$he//-y

wow that was brilliant, deep....5/5
keep ya head up

love in christ
angel

hi
sorry i havent been on this site for a while, i decided to have a break and let all my emotions onto a pad and paper ..but im back

i really liked this poem and i think you are a really really rrrreeeeeaaallllyyyyy good poet!! i wish you all the best and good luck and hopefully you will become a professional poet!

sorry i can't write as much im rushing im at school..(-_-')

that was amazin,really well written n very sad 5/5