by Sean Allen
intra: prefix meaning within or from within |
by Dorotea©
I think that this poem shows the battle a lot of people fight to find the peace inside. |
by Aken Sol
Heh, i was going to ask you what the definition was, glad you included it :P |
by lindzy
I like how you ended the last line with a question mark, i think it gives the reader something to ponder over. It was over all pretty well written althoughi thought it was sometimes a little redundant, but over all a really fine job. |
by SuperJenius
I loved It |
by Lovely Bones
I really, really like this. You sound like you put a lot of passion in this poem even though the mood of it is apathy. Or so it seems to me. This is very nice. |