Deception

by Tiny Reader   Aug 1, 2005


Not painted black in anger
Nor pink and fresh and pure,
But purple, blue and pearl
To make one confusing girl.

I won't let you in,
You won't see my face
You'll never know my dreams
And that my life's not what it seems.

Not one or the other
But still not in between
I'm living how I want to
Blocking myself from you.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Vegetable

    Wow you really made an impression without beating around the bush (i hate that expression but it fits here) i really like it- 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Hans Fausto

    hmm..could use a little work but i like it...it seems to get cut..but..the rest seems fine:D

  • 19 years ago

    by Patrik

    A little short, but well written with a great flow in the words:)

    Best wishes,
    Patrik

  • 19 years ago

    by Britney

    it was a lil short but i really liked it.. sometimes it only takes a few lines to get your point across and that was the all it took in this poem but great job i absolutely loved it. i gave it a 5

  • 19 years ago

    by InMyWorld

    short, but deep. well written n i enjoyed reading it, good job and keep it up!!!

    i'll read some others too probably...

    Sara

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