I cant wait resubmitted

by Sapphire   Aug 1, 2005


I can't wait to get to know you.
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I can't wait to get you number.
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I can't wait to hear you say you like me.
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I can't wait to hear you say you love me.
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I can't wait to hear you say Will you marry me?
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I can't wait to hear me say I do.
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I can't wait for me to find the perfect man for this to happen to.

Till then I'll pray for my dreams to come true!

please vote or comment i really like this one. :)

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  • 19 years ago

    by Sapphire

    Thank, yeah i forget the r in your sorry! :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    "I can't wait to get you number"
    it should be "your" number.

    I think this poem is okay, it is a bit short and very explicit<- (forward and to-the-point)
    I'm glad it didn't rhyme, because rhyming in a poem like this would be the kiss of death. Stylistically, I think it is very short on descriptive and poetic language, and so I feel like there is some room for improvement there.

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