This poem is awesome, I don't know why anyone has voted for it...top marks chic

Whoa. Great poem.
JJx

Cute...very nice...

Hey great poem!! really liked it though the only thing that lacked as per my feeling was the way it ended as that was very abrupt...i think it should have continued for a bit more as it started raising that feeling in u to read more of it . ... but then one thing is for sure... there is a long way to go..and u r amzing in this poem.... keep it up dear & all the best...

Hey great poem!! really liked it though the only thing that lacked as per my feeling was the way it ended as that was very abrupt...i think it should have continued for a bit more as it started raising that feeling in u to read more of it . ... but then one thing is for sure... there is a long way to go..and u r amzing in this poem.... keep it up dear & all the best...

Good poem.

I agree with what Nitin Mongia has to say.