great poem. i like how you structured it and the quotation marks on the last word of every first sentence of your stanzas make it very original. keep up the good writing!

I can defiantly relate to this. 5/5 none to less. Keep writing and take care (always))xx:

*> : PainOfOne

Great poem! I relate to it 100% stay strong and Hang in there!

Much Love,
Kat

great poem! i love it! so sad...yet so true for many people..keep it up!

Love, Taylor

Excellent poem. I've felt the way you described many times! I LOVED how this was written! It was different, and its good to read a poem thats not like the rest! five from me!...
~Chelsey~

P.S..I am so sorry you feel the way you do...I wish I could save you from your pain :(

Interesting poem, the middle seemed to not go along with the rest of the poem, though, i think that flow would be better if you could think about it, the middle seems not to lead as well into the rest of the poem.

Stll loved it a great deal, excellent read, i enjoyed every part of it.

\/\/()\/\/...i totally luffed this poem...5/5...<3 Elizabeth

hey thank you for the comment but strange is not always a bad thing

Great poem i can REALLY relate to it 5/5...can u read some of my poems and maybe comment or vote thanx :)