by DeathsRose Aug 1, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I break off a piece of my new I.D. |
by Tuffy
It's a really good poem...Little scarey though, hope you're okay. |
dddddaaaammmnn.....thats was good.... i like the ending to it its kinda twisted that ya like the pain 5/5 |
by Sweeti
hey ... ur poem is really good ... it makes me think of what i used to do. keep writing and ill check out more of your poems when u write them! alwayz -n- forever heather <3's james |
by Brianna
That poem is very... Bleak. With the help of a thesarus you could do better... Otherwise it is a very emotional poem and I think that you are a very talented poet. keep writing! |
by the middle
although that was good...kinda scary:S |