although that was good...kinda scary:S
really graphic... take care x x x

That poem is very... Bleak. With the help of a thesarus you could do better... Otherwise it is a very emotional poem and I think that you are a very talented poet. keep writing!

Please read, rate and comment on my poem called Broken Glass..It's not one of my best but I'd love to know your opinion. Thanks muchly!

Forever chaotic,
The Fire Eyed Demoness

hey ... ur poem is really good ... it makes me think of what i used to do. keep writing and ill check out more of your poems when u write them! alwayz -n- forever heather <3's james

dddddaaaammmnn.....thats was good.... i like the ending to it its kinda twisted that ya like the pain 5/5

It's a really good poem...Little scarey though, hope you're okay.
*peace