What You Make Me Feel

by ღ.:Anita Wu:.ღ   Aug 1, 2005


You were the ferocious fire
that always burn in my desire
with the passion
in the late fashion

I always wanted to be in your arms
cause I know there will be no harms
we can never stop the kissing
cause we really don't know what were missing

there are so many ways
our love heat
but there all sweet
if you were out of my sight
its like the world with no light

if you were away for a day
I would cry all the way to May
till you come back and say
“its okay"

I never thought I would find
a guy that’s so kind
I love you so much
just by the way we touch

By: Anita Wu

yeah i know i haven't wrote a poem in a long time.. been busy this whole summer but I'm writing another one now.. it should be out soon too...give me some comments ok?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    This is tight!!! I LOVE IT!!! Keep up the good work...

    Peace,
    Sammie

  • 18 years ago

    by Neil

    I loved your poem so much emotiond and is so sweet

    i loved your way of writing and everything thanks for sharing it wit me.. keep it up!

  • 19 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Hey your poem is really woow :P
    keep up the good work
    by the way why dont you cheak mine out :P

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