Rescue Me...

by ...:NiKi:...   Aug 1, 2005


Standing on the edge,
Looking down below.
Wishing I knew what would happen,
And how far I should go.

Water swirls and crashes,
Under my feet.
I wonder how they would feel,
If I jumped to my defeat.

No one would really miss me,
They wouldn't even care.
Yes, I know that sounds sad,
But life just isn't fair.

You said I should try,
To not be so down.
Well, I have tried,
And I still hope to drown.

Small rocks have started to crumble,
As I stand here, pondering my fate.
No one has come to help,
Soon it will be too late.

Maybe if someone had held me close,
And helped me to see.
I wouldn't be so alone now,
And would've said, "Rescue me..."

Copyright - Niki Schultz 2005

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  • 19 years ago

    by Natasha

    I think this poem is very captivating.. it kinda stays in you mind for a while.
    it is indeed very good to have variation in this page, you managed well ;) keep writing!

  • 19 years ago

    by Darien

    That's a really sad poem. Different from all the suicide poems I've read. Most of the others are about cutting. Good approach, and great imagery. Keep up the good work :)

  • 19 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    wow hun this was beautiful u truly are talented! xox

  • 19 years ago

    by Feline Fatigue

    it flows really good! oh i love this one!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Nicholle

    I really liked the rhyming and flow of this poem. It was very good. Keep it up

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