That was the moment

by Amanda   Aug 1, 2005


You drove for six hours
Just to see me
How long are you staying for?
And when will you leave?
On the first night
We lye upon your car
You held me in your arms
While we watched the stars

It started to rain
So I tried to get off
But you ran your fingers down my face
With your fingers that felt so soft
That was the moment
That I knew
With out a doubt
I loved you

Under the stars
You kissed me there
That was the moment
We were known as the perfect pair
We spent the next day
Cuddling in bed
We didn't do anything
We watched movies instead

We fell asleep, then the next day
You made me breakfast
Oh, I'm not hungry!
But, I insist
You took me out
And paid for everything
All of a sudden you're down on one knee
You said, "I love you!" And pulled out a ring

"Will you marry me?"
My eyes full of tears
"I love you too, and yes!"
I no longer had any more fears
That was the moment
I could stop looking
That was the moment
I could stop searching!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jessy

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  • 19 years ago

    by Beebee

    Awwwwww...sweeet

  • 19 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Very good poem

  • 19 years ago

    by James Sawyer

    Really great work keep it up

    Brian
    5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by snowboots firefighter

    Well that is the most beautiful love poem i have ever read. and the ending awsome.