Heya.. great poem... i likd it. Listen, wehn you have the chance.. could u rate&comment my new poem A wishing Dreamer? I would appreciate it.. Well keep on writing.. and good job!

hey, i love the whole repition way of writing a poem! i believe that it really gets a point across. thanks for the comments on my poem! - brian (p.s. it is ok)

That is so cute, i love it. keep it up. i love all of your entries. there great. ill comment more on what i think of your other ones. comment me.