by Melanie Aug 2, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
When people ask why i cut |
by Allison
Deep.... I really like it. Good choice of words and style. Keep up the good work. *5/5* |
by Clarissa
It was a good and well put poem at times we all feel misunderstood and depressed and it really flowed nicely to keep it up =) |
by Drew Gold
Ive been thru this.. in your depression, you think that no one cares, but i find that hard to believe... i believe some people become comfortable with being depressed, myself included.. because of this, we take on the i hate the world approach, and it doesnt help us at all.. i cant speak for you,.. but for me it's passed and i can smile while saying that.. honestly.. im not in a very good place right now and i could be depressed, but im just not.. i choose to be content.. and hopefully u can or already have come to a point like that.. anyway.. your work is full of spelling mistakes, beginning with the title.. i wont go through and tell u because it prolly wont make a difference, but i find that the more spelling errors seen, the less appealing your work is.. its kinda like the idea that if u didnt take the time to use spell check, why should we take the time to read/comment.. anyway.. 3/5.. keep writing, and reading will also help you develop writing skills, as well as spelling and vocabulary.. |
by M MEM
This is good, very nice |
by sara
Wow!! U read my mind...i cut as well...all my friends think im physco and my mom doesnt ever notice...keep up your work tho...i have a few poems about cutting as well...check em out someday |